Hey all. Now that I'm done with the first volume of Dr. Baron von Evilsatan, I'm really looking for comments from as many people as possible to help me out. Anything will help, whether it's just nice things or you decide to tear me a new one. What did you like? What didn't you like? What would you add/remove/change to characters? all that fun stuff. I'm going to get some editing done and I'll let you know on some major changes.

Which brings me to...

NAME CHANGES

I feel I need to change Ertauq's name to something a little less weird (and less of a blatant rip-off). The origins of his name more or less come from reversing the name of one of anime's earliest and most blatant homosexuals, Quatre from Gundam Wing. I'm looking for something that is maybe a little more subtle and a lot easier to spell. Heck, it could be a japanese term (although relatively spot-on, 'Bishonen' might be a little too long and obvious) if you want, I'm open to all suggestions.

Same basically goes for Magic Girl. Naming her a cliche is a bit too much, but something referencing the cliche would work much better.