I moved back to school a week ago (due to work training) and classes finally start on Wednesday. I'm a senior and a computer science major, so I get to do a project this year. Hopefully we get to do what I want and make a video game (hopefully I can get into that industry after I graduate). I'll be making stuff on my own this year as well, so I'll keep you updated on it if I can remember.

As for Dr. stuff, I'm a bit swamped. I went to an anime con a couple of weeks ago. Sadly I couldn't find an artist there (although I did try my hand at voice acting and did a great job). I had a much better edited version of the script, but I lost the flash drive with it on it. I'll get on it once my schedule calms down.

Oh and lucky me, I get to read a manga for one of my classes.

Alright, I discussed somethings with my co-author, and we believe we have the entire roster settled in. Things left blank are parts we don't know of, and could probably use input on.

TEAM EVIL

Name: Dr Baron von Evilsatan
Position(stereotype): Leader of the bad guys, crappy villain
Weapon: Ertauq, a being summoned from hammerspace (will eventually 'upgrade' to Katana-Ertauq)
Running Gags: Clever villainy, everyday things you wish you could do, 'utting-it-bluntly' humor

Name: Udrichtophen von Steinhausen III (Ud)
Position(stereotype): Evil sorcerer, badass, spaced-out mentality
Weapon: Magic produced and determined by the weed he smokes.
Running Gags: Acting cool while doing or saying very peculiar things, 'ower' jokes with the weed smoking

Name: Lilith Valentine
Position(stereotype): Fanservice girl, ninja girl, bitch
Weapon: ???
Running Gags: Is a complete bitch except for when discussing sexual things, hammerspace out of the cleavage, blatant fan-service as her 'second job'.

Name: Little Sister
Position(stereotype): Cute lolita girl, psychic, bat-shit insane
Weapon: Bubbles the Man-Eating Chainsaw, other chainsaw related weapons
Running Gags: Coupling cute lolita-esque actions with morbid ones.

Name: ???
Position(stereotype): Old Man, martial artist, womanizer
Weapon: Fists
Running Gags: Being the womanizer surrounded by girls (as opposed to the 'old pervert', brief lapses in senility. (Has the power to change his age)

Names: Masa and Mune
Position(stereotype): Demons, pervert and pyro, henchmen, mascots
Weapons: none(usually)
Running Gags: snide commentary, unwavering determination towards hobby, "Didn't you know demons could do that?"


TEAM GOOD

Name: Hiro Justice
Position(stereotype): Headstrong annoying hero
Weapon: Cho, King, & Hazzard's Super Raiden Plus 6000 Sword
Running Gags: Annoying, jumps to strange conclusions

Name: Mortimer Valentine
Position(stereotype): Emo Kid, Hero's best friend
Weapon: Several attachments for mechanical arm.
Running Gags: Cries about little things, wrangles Hiro (keeps him from acting on the ridiculous conclusions Hiro comes up with)

Name: Sakura
Position(stereotype): Magic Girl, Klutz, love interest(Hiro)
Weapon: Magic
Running Gags: Cannot distinguish between good magic powers and bad/pointless ones, Klutz + Magic = Fun

Name: Sailor Moon
Position(stereotype}: Tanker, amnesiac, quiet one
Weapon: Fists
Running Gags: Incredibly boring, discovers 'things' about past which are really crap people keep putting in his pockets, Sailor in Japanese army with last name of 'Moon' (Har Har Har)

Name??
Position(stereotype): Ninja, tool
Weapons??
Running Gags: Being a douche, no one likes him, 'College Frat-Boy'.

Name??
Position(stereotype): Cute furry bastard, mascot
Weapons: none
Running Gags: Albeit cute, it tends to do uncute things (like real pets)

Face-Offs:

Dr vs Hiro
Ud vs Sakura
Lilith vs Douchebag Ninja
Old Guy vs Sailor Moon
Little Sister vs Mortimer


Line for the Day:

"I don't really know how to say this, so I'm going to put it as nicely as I can. I want you...to...die a firey death. If I could, I would also have you die being eaten by a ravenous animal. Something preferably really painful. Maybe some kind of dragon-related accident."

Allright, I've been thinking long and hard (giggidy) about some of the future developments with Dr. Baron von Evilsatan, and I thought I'd share them with you.

1. Magic Girl's new name is Sakura. It's as stereotypical as possible (still looking for a surname).

2. NEW CHARACTER!!!!- "Sister" or "Little Sis". She's going to be the one to up our age rating (although that could quite possibly be impossible at this point) She fulfills the lolita character stereotype, the psychic, and the batshit insane stereotype. She has bouts of insanity where, in her mind, gore and violence turn into pretty things like ribbons and unicorns. This happens when she is threatened. Her signature weapon is a chainsaw that she has painted a happy face on, and name "Bubbles the Man Eating Chainsaw" or "Bubbles" for short. She will also wield other chainsaw-themed weapons such as a chainsword, chain-chucks, chainshurukin, and a chain-zooka.

3. Masa and Mune will now "Power-up" to human stature. So far, we came up with the 'how'. Masa turns this way by being kissed by a hot chick (never happens, so we know why we don't see it right away). Mune, however, gets bigger by being set on fire. This is a more of "Huh, I wonder why we didn't see this before" effect that happens waaay to often in manga/anime. Besides, she's very careful with her hobby.

4. NEW CHARACTER!!!!!11!!one!!!1eleven!!!1!- no name. So far, we've scrapped the black ninja character (noticed I ditched the Character sheet). He's still a ninja, but now it's a ninja crossed with a douchebag/tool. He wears the regular black ninja outfit and a polo shirt with the collar popped. No one will like him, and he can honestly be on either side.

THINGS WE NEED HELP WITH

1. Ertauq's new name
2. Masa and Mune's powers when in 'big' mode
3. Douchebag Ninja's name
4. Douchebag Ninja's alignment.
5. Character Stereotypes we haven't addressed (still some slots left).

and now...5 second plot twist

*Poof*

Ud: who are you?

Mary-Sue: Hi, My name is Mary-Sue!

Ud: *Sarcasm* Really?

Mary-Sue: Yeah, I'm really cool! I can do anything really well and I have a sparkling infectious personality and all the boys want to be with me and all the girls want to be my friend and I'm really nice and I never mess up and I have perfect teeth and-

Ud: We'll be having none of that *draws gun and shoots Mary-Sue*

Ud: *storms off* fucking fanfictions...

Hey all. Now that I'm done with the first volume of Dr. Baron von Evilsatan, I'm really looking for comments from as many people as possible to help me out. Anything will help, whether it's just nice things or you decide to tear me a new one. What did you like? What didn't you like? What would you add/remove/change to characters? all that fun stuff. I'm going to get some editing done and I'll let you know on some major changes.

Which brings me to...

NAME CHANGES

I feel I need to change Ertauq's name to something a little less weird (and less of a blatant rip-off). The origins of his name more or less come from reversing the name of one of anime's earliest and most blatant homosexuals, Quatre from Gundam Wing. I'm looking for something that is maybe a little more subtle and a lot easier to spell. Heck, it could be a japanese term (although relatively spot-on, 'Bishonen' might be a little too long and obvious) if you want, I'm open to all suggestions.

Same basically goes for Magic Girl. Naming her a cliche is a bit too much, but something referencing the cliche would work much better.

Hey all. Now that I'm done with the first volume of Dr. Baron von Evilsatan, I'm really looking for comments from as many people as possible to help me out. Anything will help, whether it's just nice things or you decide to tear me a new one. What did you like? What didn't you like? What would you add/remove/change to characters? all that fun stuff. I'm going to get some editing done and I'll let you know on some major changes.

First off...

NAME CHANGE

I feel I need to change Ertauq's name to something a little less weird (and less of a blatant rip-off). The origins of his name more or less come from reversing the name of one of anime's earliest and most blatant homosexuals, Quatre from Gundam Wing. I'm looking for something that is maybe a little more subtle and a lot easier to spell. Heck, it could be a japanese term (although relatively spot-on, 'Bishonen' might be a little too long and obvious) if you want, I'm open to all suggestions.

Same basically goes for Magic Girl. Naming her a cliche is a bit too much, but something referencing the cliche would work much better.