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Dr Epilogue(Dr, Masa and Mune are watching Hiro and Mortimer walking out the exit. Hiro is using Mortimer as a crutch).   
Masa: Is it true what you said about your parents?   
Mune: Yeah, I thought you told us they were farmers in Iowa?   
Dr: huh?...(bursts out laughing) Yeah you’re right. I just came up with that to fuck with his head.   
Masa: On the spot? That was impressive.   
Dr: I know right? it never gets old screwing with people’s emotions.   
(outside)   
Hiro: Ow ow ow ow….   
Mortimer: Are you ok?   
Hiro: A freakin' chandelier dropped Dr Epilogue
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Dr Part VIIIHiro: I really don’t care… I bet he has both entrances trapped. We'll just have to face down whatever he throws at us.   
Mortimer: Well, after we're done walking into certain death, can we stop by the food counter? I’m starving.   
Hiro: Maybe…   
Mortimer: ‘Maybe’ as in "Maybe", or "Maybe" as in there's no chance in hell, but you're to big of a sissy to disappoint me to my face?   
Hiro: Both   
Mortimer: Whatever, I’m just going to get some now. I’ll meet you back here when you’re done.   
Hiro: No wait! (grabs arm) Despite my constant Dr Part VIII
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Dr part VII(scene to a building marked “Tokyo Sunshine and Smile Factory”. Inside is a large garage with an assortment of equipment and half-finished projects. There are three visible vehicles, and Ice Cream Truck, a Tank, and an X-Wing. Mortimer is underneath the truck and Hiro enters with the mail)   
Hiro: Mail’s here, it looks like you got a few more CD’s (tosses them to Mortimer as he reads off) “Pain, Sorrow and Grapefruit”, “Crying Kittens, Weeping Puppies”, “Everything Sucks Especially Myself”…   
Mortimer: Great (Morty readjusts his new metal right arm)   
Hiro Dr part VII
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Dr Part VI(Several Months later)   
(Dr. now has very long straight hair and a goatee on his chin).   
Dr: Alright, villainous goatee…(Checks D&D-esque character sheet of himself) that’s plus two to Intimidation rolls, aaaand girlishly long hair, with a plus three to Charisma towards teenage fangirls.  
 
*Dr. takes a long look into a mirror and gives a long sigh. He summons Ertauq and sets him down*   
Dr: Ertauq…what do you think of my hair?   
*Ertauq gives a big smile and thumbs up*   
*Dr thinks to himself for a second.*   
Dr: Aw….screw it. *proceeds to cut Dr Part VI
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Tue Jun 23, 2009, 12:10 AM
Hey all. Now that I'm done with the first volume of Dr. Baron von Evilsatan, I'm really looking for comments from as many people as possible to help me out. Anything will help, whether it's just nice things or you decide to tear me a new one. What did you like? What didn't you like? What would you add/remove/change to characters? all that fun stuff. I'm going to get some editing done and I'll let you know on some major changes.

Which brings me to...

NAME CHANGES

I feel I need to change Ertauq's name to something a little less weird (and less of a blatant rip-off). The origins of his name more or less come from reversing the name of one of anime's earliest and most blatant homosexuals, Quatre from Gundam Wing. I'm looking for something that is maybe a little more subtle and a lot easier to spell. Heck, it could be a japanese term (although relatively spot-on, 'Bishonen' might be a little too long and obvious) if you want, I'm open to all suggestions.

Same basically goes for Magic Girl. Naming her a cliche is a bit too much, but something referencing the cliche would work much better.

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=BlackInfinity666:iconBlackInfinity666: Feb 15, 2009, 2:51:07 PM
thanks for visiting~~

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*VirgilD:iconVirgilD: Jan 14, 2009, 12:37:06 PM
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~twicethepirate:icontwicethepirate: Jan 14, 2009, 9:16:19 PM
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*VirgilD:iconVirgilD: Jan 15, 2009, 7:31:12 AM
You had posted a journal entry about dying from some kind of bacteria or something... Or was it someone else?

Are you that Aether dude? :-?

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~twicethepirate:icontwicethepirate: Jan 15, 2009, 11:20:03 AM
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*VirgilD:iconVirgilD: Jan 15, 2009, 7:25:40 PM
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~twicethepirate:icontwicethepirate: Jan 12, 2009, 7:59:00 PM
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=Sakuyuki:iconSakuyuki: May 27, 2008, 5:24:19 PM
Thankyou for the watch and the fav, feel free to repost the picture into your gallery if you wish, she is your character after all.
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